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by CaraBanana » Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:02 am
...as the Magus.

It's also in my deviantART scraps, but anyhow... let me know what you think. ^^
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by Dr. Sheexy » Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:16 am
Ah, all the pink and the blonde hair made me think this was Purim in a different costume for a second. XD
I think it's pretty good. The basic anatomy is pretty solid, just needs little attention to details. For example the feet are kind of odd, they seem too small and too narrow. I notice lots of people have trouble with feet, hands too. It really helps to look at references for shoe shapes and such when drawing them.
Sorry if it seems overly critical, but I can't help but give constructive criticism. XD
Keep drawing!
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by Tekka » Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:21 am
I always love Angela, no matter what colours she's wearing. <3
I think it's the ears.
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by kirby » Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:24 am
This is pretty good Cara but i do not think my opinion is valid in this subject because I am a critic in many things just not art. Remember I am the person who failed art class.
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by CaraBanana » Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:59 am
Thanks guys ^^
Sheexy wrote:...the feet are kind of odd, they seem too small and too narrow. I notice lots of people have trouble with feet, hands too. It really helps to look at references for shoe shapes and such when drawing them.
Sorry if it seems overly critical, but I can't help but give constructive criticism. XD
Yeah, I hate drawing feet and hands. x_x I tried to have the pointy toes in her boots work but yeah, it kind of turned out weird... xD
Anyhow, you're not being overly critical so don't worry. ^^
@kirby: Anybody's opinion is valid. ^^ I didn't do too well in art class either, but that just because I don't stay on task. xD
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by kirby » Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:30 am
CaraBanana wrote:@kirby: Anybody's opinion is valid. ^^ I didn't do too well in art class either, but that just because I don't stay on task. xD
I stink at art regardless if I am on task or not. But if any of my art teachers saw something like this you would probably fail, no offense Cara but i do not know how anyone passes art class when the teachers for it are so overly critical.
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by CaraBanana » Thu Feb 18, 2010 1:11 pm
hawklise33 wrote:thats pretty nice
Thanks ^^
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by manaman » Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:17 am
Thanks for sharing! I like your coloring.
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by CaraBanana » Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:55 am
manaman wrote:Thanks for sharing! I like your coloring.
Thank you and no problem ^^
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by Hawk » Mon Feb 22, 2010 2:28 am
Really good. whats your devian art?
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by CaraBanana » Mon Feb 22, 2010 11:48 am
Hawk wrote:Really good. whats your devian art?
XxJennessaxX.
Thank you ^^
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by Abdul_Moti » Mon Feb 22, 2010 7:58 pm
Keep it up, comrade Cara. You'll excel as your experience tells.
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Keep up the good work.
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by CaraBanana » Tue Feb 23, 2010 9:50 am
Abdul_Moti wrote:Keep it up, comrade Cara. You'll excel as your experience tells.
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Keep up the good work.
Awww thank youuu

Of course I will keep it up... art is my life and I always find new ways to accomplish an artistic task

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by Duran » Mon Mar 08, 2010 9:13 pm
Tekka wrote:I always love Angela, no matter what colours she's wearing. <3
I think it's the ears.
That
MY you're talking about!
