Head doesn't seem too too big, just very very slighty.
You always draw eyes and hair so gorgeous.
That dagger looks awesome, and your anatomy is really good. I still think the arms look a tiny bit too short though x_x
Great job! There wasn't much to work with from the FFA drawing XD
You did a million times better remaking her than the SwoM team did XD
"Dude, you're in college. In my mind's eye, you're still, like, 12 years old and humming songs from SoM. My poor brain is trying to catch up." ~ My cousin Jamy