Simple yet humble poem

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Abdul_Moti
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Post by Abdul_Moti »

recently I made something that people call a poem.
I still unsure if the writing below is a poem, so please read and judge.
It's (not) a long one, so this is an excerpt of the first three.

Crazycracy

in this humble place
hypocrites have a charge
yelled democracy is here

aristocrats went angry
the best is aristocracy
as the nation policy

the majesty awakens
kings, emperors and sultans
yawn that autocracy wins


the full writings can bee seen here.
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